I think you have done a good job. Some of the slides were to short so I couldn't read all of the writing, also some of the writing was to big so half of the words were cut off. The music sounded like it had just been picked randomly. The last slide I couldn't see because the slide was to small and the writing was half off the page.
I think you have done well and that the music and pictures fitted really well with the song and its meaning. I did notice one mistake in the lyrics where you missed out a word near the start. I also wondered why it was soo long but then I found out that you wrote the echoes as one line each as well, personally I would have put the line on one slide with the echoed line in brackets below. I also couldn't see some of the words on the sides in some slides, and it was a bit disappointing when I wanted to know what you had said in the last slide of what you thought. Overall pretty good, from Mya ;)
You have chosen a song with a strong meaning and you put in good pictures that went with most of the words. As the song got to halfway, it started looking like a last minute thing, and I think you stopped thinking about whether you could read the words and if it was too fast or not. Some of the slides I couldn't read, because they were either too fast or the writing was off the screen. The second to last slide I couldn't read it at all, and for some of the song I had to guess what the words were. Next time I think you need to take the time to go through and make sure you can read each slide.
I think you have done a good job. Some of the slides were to short so I couldn't read all of the writing, also some of the writing was to big so half of the words were cut off. The music sounded like it had just been picked randomly. The last slide I couldn't see because the slide was to small and the writing was half off the page.
ReplyDeleteI think you have done well and that the music and pictures fitted really well with the song and its meaning. I did notice one mistake in the lyrics where you missed out a word near the start. I also wondered why it was soo long but then I found out that you wrote the echoes as one line each as well, personally I would have put the line on one slide with the echoed line in brackets below. I also couldn't see some of the words on the sides in some slides, and it was a bit disappointing when I wanted to know what you had said in the last slide of what you thought. Overall pretty good, from Mya ;)
ReplyDeleteThe music is good and the photos are good as well. The moving image was really, really long. I noticed that a few of the words are cut off as well.
ReplyDeleteYou have chosen a song with a strong meaning and you put in good pictures that went with most of the words. As the song got to halfway, it started looking like a last minute thing, and I think you stopped thinking about whether you could read the words and if it was too fast or not. Some of the slides I couldn't read, because they were either too fast or the writing was off the screen. The second to last slide I couldn't read it at all, and for some of the song I had to guess what the words were. Next time I think you need to take the time to go through and make sure you can read each slide.
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